Clueless

Three girls were giggling in the elevator. It was their usual bantering.

To top off one girl's teasing, she blurted out "you bitch!" turning around as the elevator door opened. And there a clueless guy froze on the spot, shocked.

The girls stopped cold. Then, they were laughing even harder.
This is my first attempt at writing a mini saga, which, I have been meaning to take a shot at. A mini saga, invented by Brian Aldiss, is a story told in exactly 50 words. Writing mini sagas is a good exercise on trimming down "unnecessary" words to get down to your main idea or thought. Hope you enjoyed this one because I mean to write one everyday..

1 comment:

  1. We can really relate this one...:-)

    ReplyDelete

Thanks for reading! I'd love to hear your thoughts on this post, please comment below: